Thank you very much, Tim. That's generous.
L
On Wed, April 13, 2011 11:48, Tim Allen wrote:
> Very very good Lawrence. I've written about the metamorphic shapes in
> clouds changing too, but nowhere near as good as this.
>
> Tim A.
> On 13 Apr 2011, at 11:05, Lawrence Upton wrote:
>
>
>> Three large dogs gather over northern Deptford,
>> side by side, odd steps, up and down, skew-whiff, a furry staircase
>> heavily, panting.
>>
>> They go still then, seemingly lying on the air,
>> expressionless. They neither bite nor growl. And then they start to
>> disintegrate.
>>
>> One head
>> just goes, leaving the neck open, terminal. Front paw pairs shatter as if
>> they’re missile hit. A neck bends like a vacuum cleaner tube
>>
>>
>> drawing on dust and cloud through severing skin; shoulders follow it
>> down, distorting too, while the still-connected skull hangs below,
>>
>> each jaw lax and separate; the teeth glitter as they wobble in indirect
>> sunlight. And finger tips we cannot see pluck eyes.
>>
>>
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>> collaborative visual work:-
>> http://www.poetrybeyondtext.org/upton-begbie.html
>> http://www.poetrybeyondtext.org/begbie-upton.html
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>> Lawrence Upton
>> AHRC Creative Research Fellow
>> Dept of Music
>> Goldsmiths, University of London
>>
>
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collaborative visual work:-
http://www.poetrybeyondtext.org/upton-begbie.html
http://www.poetrybeyondtext.org/begbie-upton.html
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Lawrence Upton
AHRC Creative Research Fellow
Dept of Music
Goldsmiths, University of London
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