Hey Jill, I dont think I'm speaking only for myself when I say, we
hope so too...
Doug
Quoting "[log in to unmask]" <[log in to unmask]>:
> Hi Barry,
>
> That's interesting about your email's version of what I sent. I'm
> operating from
> a webmail system at the moment and it does not show up.
>
> I should ask what you did imagine before I go into details, but I
> will say that
> the title 'Eight Lines' is also the title of a piece by Steve Reich,
> that I was
> listening to at the time. And the phrase 'repeat and change' was the
> source of
> the text generation.
>
> Cheers,
> Jill
>
>
> P.S. By the way, all my poetryetc friends, I have been much preoccupied with
> multitudinous 'stuff' over the last couple of months and, though I see
> discussions, snaps and other material sweep through my in-box, I
> have not been
> able to enter into the stream. This snap is the first 'anything' -
> minimal as it
> is - I have written, apart from admin or student-based necessities, for ages.
> (Now I have a lecture on Ashbery to prepare.) Even emails have been all
> business-related. I hope for a freeing up soon, so I can join in the
> exchange again.
>
>
> ________________________
> Jill Jones
>
> www.jilljones.com.au
>
>
>
> On Fri Apr 8 6:30 , Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> sent:
>
>> I enjoyed rereading your poem. Altered syntactical relations came
>> to mind. I
> believe I can imagine your process of composition.
>>
>> Though your two instructional lines in appear when one clicks on your first
> post of this within the archive, but not when one merely positions the cursor
> over the link.
>>
>> Barry
>>
>>
>> On Thu, 7 Apr 2011 04:11:38 +0000, [log in to unmask]
>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>>> two lines missing from under poem when I sent this
>>>
>>> repeat
>>> and change
>>>
>>> which I enclosed with , each. But my webmail probably interpreted
>>> it as some
>>> kind of code and deleted.
>>>
>>> J
>>>
>>>
>>> ________________________
>>> Jill Jones
>>>
>>> www.jilljones.com.au
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: [log in to unmask] [log in to unmask]>
>>> To: ''Poetryetc : poetry and poetics'' [log in to unmask]>
>>> Sent: Thu Apr 7 14:08
>>> Subject: Fwd: snap - eight lines
>>>
>>>
>>> reap angel
>>>
>>> dance eat
>>>
>>> hang and
>>>
>>> chang p-chang
>>>
>>> rap a pan
>>>
>>> gel gel, gel
>>>
>>> re danger, get
>>>
>>> rapt, ha
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> ________________________
>>> Jill Jones
>>>
>>> www.jilljones.com.au
>
>
Douglas Barbour
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Edmonton Alberta T6G 0B9
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