Well, I went with it and let it unspool in my mind, and it was great:
pictures, sounds, and thoughts spliced in together. I enjoyed the ellipsis
and the jumps of point of view. Thanks, Barry!
Andrew
On 31 March 2011 01:51, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> As Stephen say, Barry, a fascinating series of takes...; not least the
> shifting pronouns & thus the 'projected' speakers. I look forward to the
> followups (& eventually watching the films perhaps).
>
> Doug
>
>
> On 2011-03-30, at 11:03 AM, Barry Alpert wrote:
>
> > A LETTER TO UNCLE BOONMEE & HIS RESPONSE
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
> http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
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> Latest books:
> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
> Wednesdays'
>
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
>
> Just a late night pilgrim
> Looking for redemption in the underground.
> Lord, won't you help a late night pilgrim
> When the morning comes around.
>
> Tift Merritt
>
--
Andrew
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