Thanks Jill.
How to keep in touch with the world but not let that control the writing act.
Doug
On 2011-02-17, at 8:51 PM, Jill Jones wrote:
> Doug,
>
> The turns in this one really work for me, especially lines 5-7 and last three.
>
> Cheers,
> Jill
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