Intriguing, Andrew.
Not sure of that 'they' & not even sure you need the 2nd stanza (maybe
i want your head only implied)....
but the 3rd, yes.
Doug
On 27-Oct-10, at 2:34 AM, andrew burke wrote:
> cabbage moths -
> stark white against
> grey clouds - cavort
> in a brisk afternoon breeze
>
> verb and noun
> they take turns
> noun and verb
> turn in my head
>
> Wittgenstein holds
> the lollipop at
> the crossing of two
> schools of thought
>
>
>
>
>
> --
> Andrew
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>
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