Thanks, Doug. After that comparative struggle, I easily revised last night's attempt at an acrostic sonnet written while witnessing the 50th anniversary restored version of Godard's "Breathless", despite all those unpoetic jump cuts.
Barry
On Wed, 30 Jun 2010 15:26:27 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>Barry
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>I like it, the sense of language brought over hardly, & the 'of's...
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>Doug
>On 30-Jun-10, at 1:03 PM, Barry Alpert wrote:
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>> YVES KLEIN
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>> via/of Rotraut Klein
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>Douglas Barbour
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>Latest books:
>Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
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>Wednesdays'
>http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
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>because I want to die
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>writing Haiku
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>or, better,
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>long lines, clean and syllabic as knotted bamboo. Yes!
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> Phyllis Webb
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