I'll have to think on that, Andrew, but thanks for the rest. It did
begin with that phrase resurfacing as I listened to something else.
Doug
On 14-Apr-10, at 5:51 PM, andrew burke wrote:
> Absolutely great lines. For me, the first couple of lines are a weak
> beginning.
>
> Andrew
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