It is sweet, Brian
but drop the 'it's like' in the final stanza....
Doug
On 23-Mar-10, at 9:43 PM, Brian Hawkins wrote:
> WALK WITH ROSIE
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> More golden and beautiful even
> Than walking on my own it is
> To walk in the forest
> With the baby slung from my chest.
>
> When she's awake, her eyes
> Look round her like double moons;
> And when she sleeps, it's like
> My blood beats in two hearts.
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> Brian
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