David Bircumshaw wrote:
> Sheila
>
> there are some beautiful modulations in this. Best of all I thought:
>
> in a handful of small
> conversations
>
> with just above and before:
>
> listen to the Dutch elm
> breeze shake childhood
> from familiar breezes
>
> linked by:
>
> (one speaks of porches
>
>
> my sense was of thoughts or perception half-caught, like words muffled by a
> breeze, which might:
>
>
> when the look of
> pavement holds heat
> for the duration, and a side
> of affection holds still,
> holds true,
> holds even water
> for the heart
>
Blimey, /another/ dingbat I agree with!
--Bob
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