Sorry Judy, I meant in the text of the e-mail, as in : ('ve revised ...
(looking at chinoiserie is making this writer first person averse a verse,
m'kingdom for the worse)
On 10 February 2010 20:22, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> If you wish, Dave, please post one of those earlier versions showing your
> wrestling down the irritant first person; otherwise, I can't imagine it
> well
> enuff.
>
> joods
>
> On 10 February 2010 12:02, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]
> >wrote:
>
> > Ta, joodles ('ve revised it three times already y'know - do you like my
> > (eek) just solution to the irritant first person?)
> >
> > On 10 February 2010 16:32, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> > > Yeah, love it!
> > >
> > > joodles
> > >
> > > On 10 February 2010 02:08, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]
> > > >wrote:
> > >
> > > > *For now, as it tries to get in*
> > > > **
> > > >
> > > > A squall of snow stopped, frustrated
> > > > on your stilled liquid : pane
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
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> > David Bircumshaw
> > "A window./Big enough to hold screams/
> > You say are poems" - DMeltzer
> > Website and A Chide's Alphabet
> > http://www.staplednapkin.org.uk
> > The Animal Subsides http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
> > Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/david.bircumshaw
> > twitter: http://twitter.com/bucketshave
> > blog: http://groggydays.blogspot.com/
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> "I can't read my library card." ---Jeff Hecker, Norfolk, VA
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David Bircumshaw
"A window./Big enough to hold screams/
You say are poems" - DMeltzer
Website and A Chide's Alphabet
http://www.staplednapkin.org.uk
The Animal Subsides http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/david.bircumshaw
twitter: http://twitter.com/bucketshave
blog: http://groggydays.blogspot.com/
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