If you wish, Dave, please post one of those earlier versions showing your
wrestling down the irritant first person; otherwise, I can't imagine it well
enuff.
joods
On 10 February 2010 12:02, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
> Ta, joodles ('ve revised it three times already y'know - do you like my
> (eek) just solution to the irritant first person?)
>
> On 10 February 2010 16:32, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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> > Yeah, love it!
> >
> > joodles
> >
> > On 10 February 2010 02:08, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]
> > >wrote:
> >
> > > *For now, as it tries to get in*
> > > **
> > >
> > > A squall of snow stopped, frustrated
> > > on your stilled liquid : pane
> > >
> > >
> > >
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> > > David Bircumshaw
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> David Bircumshaw
> "A window./Big enough to hold screams/
> You say are poems" - DMeltzer
> Website and A Chide's Alphabet
> http://www.staplednapkin.org.uk
> The Animal Subsides http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
> Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/david.bircumshaw
> twitter: http://twitter.com/bucketshave
> blog: http://groggydays.blogspot.com/
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