Thanks, Doug, Judy, Angel and the silent majority who read and thought. It
is my first attempt at digging myself out of a 'dry spell' after a heart
attack which left me a little befuddled. Words weren't hanging together even
in simple patterns. Now, I can open my eyes and ears to the world around me
more each day - less chronically self-absorbed! Beware - more poems may seep
out.
Eliot is for the bin, then.
Andrew
2010/1/29 Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> Andrew
>
> it's interesting, but, for me, the obvious quotes get in the way, & dont
> seem to be necessary.
>
> I'd certainly, if including them, just put the words 'hollow' & 'stuffed'
> there, & maybe cut the others a bit too....
>
> Also, 'faded in' suggests an even more fragmented 'read' possible, which my
> suggestion impiies....
>
> Doug
> On 28-Jan-10, at 5:02 PM, andrew burke wrote:
>
> Illustrated History (title)
>>
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ <http://www.ualberta.ca/%7Edbarbour/>
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> Latest books:
> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
> Wednesdays'
>
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
>
> Swept snow, Li Po,
> by dawn's 40-watt moon
> to the road that hies to office
> away from home.
>
> Lorine Niedecker
>
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Andrew
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