i have no answers : )
i googled trickle up after i pulled the impulse send trigger and of course
wikipedia has fully described the concept i thought was all my very own.
humanity is including me with the problem... so, I'm not pointing fingers;
but, including myself in something that needs to be addressed.
i think vagueness allows the reader enough room to catch the idea and come
up with their own interpretation. of course i could spell out my exactness;
but, i want the reader to address the closure with themselves...like a belt
that can be worn by many because of the notch design. i had to add a notch
to a belt i have once. have you ever seen that little ball pean hole making
hammer thing they have going on. leather shops are like poetry.
i'm throwing thoughts on the wall and seeing what sticks. i'm not a
journalist, i'm a...
something. whatever you call an observer that reports something based on the
facts in their own style.
appreciate the response.
On Sun, Jan 24, 2010 at 2:15 AM, Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Nice concept.
> I read 'trickle up' as an opposition to 'trickle-down'
>
> The middle lines are vague... 'the thought / humanity / So, absurd'
> *What* thought?
> *What* is absurd?
> Is 'humanity' being addressed or described?
>
> Janet
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> 2010/1/23 Angel Robert Marquez <[log in to unmask]>
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> > The Vision
> > A rainbow swastika
> > the thought
> > humanity
> > So, absurd
> > How do we make IT trickle up
> > and give the symbols back
> > their true meaning.
> >
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