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From: "Douglas Barbour" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, August 27, 2009 11:07 AM
Subject: Re: 4 poems
Tourist as reader, perhaps, Fred?
I think many of us can identify with *Moi Haïssable*, & its ending....
not to mention that of 'Sail Away,' as I hear at least 2 songs with
that title echoing....
Perhaps the fact of 4 made it harder for people to react right away. I
think they generally work as dark narrative....
Doug
Tourist / reader ** exactly ... I'm glad you liked these - I've been ill
recently and these come out of a particularly back-to-the-wall place.
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