Hmmn, I got the dashes, Brian, & the dash of the piece.
I wondered at the 'could might still' but youve obviously thought
about it, as your reply to Max indicates, so let it be....
Doug
On 21-Jul-09, at 6:42 PM, Brian Hawkins wrote:
> Blacksnake
>
> Blacksnake, easy as the wind
> making the grasses nod
> in yellow agreement, saying
> Yes, he passed this way; yes
> he could might still
> be close – glimpse
> of a rosy coil, shifting –
> zephyr crawling at ground level
> in brazen winter sun
>
>
> Brian
>
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