Thanks Doug,
I am very interested in what might be got out of the poem by a reader with no knowledge of the activities described. I tried to put in enough clues to allow sense to be made, even though the names and terminology may mean little. Glad the first and last overs of the poem conveyed something.
Brian
--- On Thu, 16/7/09, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> From: Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> Subject: Re: Strange Radiance (sort of snap)
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Received: Thursday, 16 July, 2009, 2:00 AM
> All too strange to (at least most of)
> your North American readers, Brian, but a story there for
> you, to tell....
>
> so for me, the first 6 lines & the last 6 convey
> enough....
>
> Doug
> On 15-Jul-09, at 1:49 AM, Brian Hawkins wrote:
>
> > A STRANGE RADIANCE
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> Latest books:
> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
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> What in the world we see
> is what's important.
>
> Richard Caddel
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