Well, thanks for the discussion, Kenneth. I also see sliding doors as a
choice, whereas hinged doors I see as open or shut. The choices with sliding
is more fluidic - not either/or, yes/no ... I saw 'sliding' with the
chronology of my parents' deaths just as an example, and I thought about how
my father was before he died (very young, 42) and projected that into the
future. A lot was in my head and stayed there, only slivghtly expressed. The
hinged doors image is also an architectural historic image - no sliding
doors in houses I knew as a child. They came in later, in 'modern' homes.
So, elements of time were also being implied. But IK make it sound like a
meant to say something: no, as usual, it is all organic with me. The syntax
is different than my 'natural' voice. I am pleased to have something to work
on, to improve. Which is difficult to do with overcooked spaghetti >g<
Andrew
2009/7/18 Kenneth Wolman <[log in to unmask]>
> andrew burke wrote:
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>> *Sliding Doors*
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>> *What is shared, at **
>> best, is intriguing, your life, this
>> surrogate social struggle.*
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>> Charles Bernstein
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