We're not so heavily into The Raven in Oz. I like it as a tale, but maybe
Doug's point is right - speed it up a little. And maybe it is one of a
number of such tales ... Just a thought.
Still down south, JJ, so won't be at any of the readings. Be good to support
Fringe on Sunday night. I know Dick well - he's a nice bloke.
Andrew
2009/6/18 Jon Corelis <[log in to unmask]>
> I liked the poem, but I was distracted because I couldn't help thinking of
> "The Raven" and I couldn't tell if I was supposed to.
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