I like it. somehow dazedly lucid (& pretty certainly). I see it as a snap at
shallow social norms.
KS
2009/5/11 sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]>
> one of two weird, middle-of-the-night -- poems?
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>
> 2009 May 10
>
> mirror-man
> i saw you
> drop your hand in the river
>
> mirror-man
> pull up the current, channel it
> between
>
> other-half, no
> mirror-man, all the halves
> pulling, pulling that current
>
> still, as our continents
> drift apart
> mirror-man, flat and cold
>
> as water
>
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>
> sharon brogan
>
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