Some images there hope that you did not trip up
Cheers P
Ps do you need 'in' (line 4)
Pps it's dead miserable here at the moment gloomy dark and darker darkest
dark or so a bit darker still a day to underachieve -which has just inspired
insipid a poem
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of andrew burke
Sent: 14 January 2009 10:01
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Subject: snap: summertime
walking two dogs
one big one small
one black one white
tongues flapping like flags
in the first heatwave
of this season
the swamp's drying up
little creeks gone
dogs rush to the river
swim in lazy circles
Jack Russell rushing
to roll in gritty sand
woman watering her lawn
wet from her pool
nipples say 'hi!'
through her cotton t-shirt
dog's lead tugs me on
urging me to keep up
keep up don't look back
don't look back
--
Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
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