title's neat too, Tina, but I like that final line in the first
version, as a separate stanza...
tough little view.
Doug
On 17-Jan-09, at 4:28 PM, Tina Bass wrote:
> the title has changed from nothing to _Grip_
>
>
>
> LIKE a raindrop finding its way into a house
> reminding that it
> is no more
> than a shack
> much less than a cave
>
> all houses fall
> given time
> enough raindrops
> and a householder
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