Thanks Barry
you always 'see' so much in so little (which is how you see the films
too)....
Doug
On 15-Jan-09, at 9:56 AM, Barry Alpert wrote:
> Doug,
>
> Multiple syntactical readings, in part because there's only one
> verb. Though perhaps
> "shadows" functions in part as a verb despite the extra space before
> it which helps make
> the case for it as a noun. I like the opening line as an art world
> description in itself
> before the overall syntax of the stanza takes over, even propelling
> the reader into the
> second stanza once visualization of "street lights/snow" occurs.
>
> Barry
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