On Mon, Dec 22, 2008 at 10:25 AM, Jon Corelis <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Artless art:
>
> 1) exclusion of hiatus (except for the word "poems") to avoid the
> awkwardness it gives especially in a song lyric and harder to avoid
> than might be thought (six examples in this sentence so far);
Forgot "the airy", though could argue deliberate isolated hiatus gives
fluttering "airy" feeling to phrase.
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