true enough. a bit of tweaking in order.
bj
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From: "Douglas Barbour" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Saturday, December 13, 2008 12:27 PM
Subject: Re: Along the Rue Victor Masse
It's a good attempt at a seeing of the other, but I wonder, did you
intend the cliches of /cavernous eyes' & 'sneering grin'?
harangue....
on one level those & 'smirked' do go together' but as repetitions from
many other such....
Doug
On 11-Dec-08, at 11:07 PM, bj omanson wrote:
> Along the Rue Victor Masse
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