Thanks Judy.
I find it interesting that you never doubt.
I wonder how others interpret the poem or respond to it.
Janet
2008/11/9 Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]>
> This is lovely, Janet. Each line a shelf, a ledge for our flight. Enuff
> on
> those ledges for our understanding 'where' we're about to fly. And quite
> the romance, after all. We never once doubt that it'll be a duo, not a
> solo, flight.
> Judy
>
> 2008/11/8 Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
>
> > Not sure whether this works. Probably been done before anyway.
> >
> > *With a series of txts we.*
> > 2008
> >
> > With a series of txts we.
> > I take wine.
> > We share a plate of
> > The light dim, the candle
> > talk poetry anarchy
> > & how not to
> > & how bad my
> > & how clumsy
> > & how we hate mornings
> >
> > We move outside so he
> > take our
> > I up
> > I stare at try to look
> > because of his
> > &
> > staring to one side when he talks
> > His eyelashes are dark & delicate
> > His hair is trashed
> > His pencil-sharp knife-free nose,
> > longline chin marred by unshaven
> >
> > He isn't well, I should let
> > But he a cigarette
> > & txts some
> > his fingers so long, so soft
> >
> > *Janet*
> > --
> > I'm looking for writing-related paid work! Performance (my poetry, yours
> or
> > someone else's); any kind of writing including technical or corporate;
> > ghostwriting; editing; teaching creative writing, poetry or performance;
> > selling books; literary administration... whatever. All leads
> appreciated.
> >
> > Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> > www.proximitypoetry.com (Poetry)
> > www.myspace.com/poetjj (Includes occasional arts & culture blog)
> >
> > The Line Mine, bulletin board for Perth poetry & spoken word:
> > [log in to unmask]
> > groups.yahoo.com/group/thelinemine
> >
> > Breastfeeding info & help: www.breastfeeding.asn.au
> >
>
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I'm looking for writing-related paid work! Performance (my poetry, yours or
someone else's); any kind of writing including technical or corporate;
ghostwriting; editing; teaching creative writing, poetry or performance;
selling books; literary administration... whatever. All leads appreciated.
Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
www.proximitypoetry.com (Poetry)
www.myspace.com/poetjj (Includes occasional arts & culture blog)
The Line Mine, bulletin board for Perth poetry & spoken word:
[log in to unmask]
groups.yahoo.com/group/thelinemine
Breastfeeding info & help: www.breastfeeding.asn.au
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