And it's been fun so far, Alison. Although I could see a possibility
of editing a bit into a more contemporary vocalization?
Just some small cuts here & there eventually?
Doug
On 24-Nov-08, at 2:46 PM, Alison Croggon wrote:
> I don't seriously expect it to be published, but it's the kind of
> thing that needs hearers (even if imaginary ones). Some poems don't,
> but this is a story, and has addressees; and there's definitely a poet
> eliciting attention in the middle of it. (Not me, I mean.) If the list
> would bear with me, it would be a great help. I promise there are more
> exciting bits later on...
Douglas Barbour
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