Alison,
I like what you've done in fitts 3 and 4, but the appearance of <eaves> again (I think you used it in fitt1 as well) reminded me that I wanted to suggest using <gables> instead, as Heorot is a <horned> or <antlered> hall and you get more sweeping height with <gables>. (Just a suggestion.)
Candice
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