as narrative, self-conscious, it works, although you might be able to
edit it down a bit. the necessary story-logic propels it I think.
Doug
On 8-Nov-08, at 10:16 PM, Janet Jackson wrote:
> my third style of the moment. this one's a true story
>
> *A long way that way*
> 2008
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