My deepest thanks to members of both lists for your kind criticism,
suggestions and compliments. I am very self-conscious, even shy about my
writing and it took a lot to submit my poem to the list. You have
encouraged me to send more. I won't bombard you, though, I promise. Thanks
again...robert Watling.
On Thu, 27 Nov 2008 19:10:42 -0800, Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> ooh, we got a live one here, poets!
> I like it (obviously).
> The lightdark simplicity of the language.
> It's like an elegant black-and-white photograph.
> The only suggestion of emotional content in this poem comes from the
> repetition. If you condensed it, that might be lost.
> Janet
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"Cogito ergo...how does that go again?"...rewjr.
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