oh sorry. it's the same link as before, I just edit it there.:
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfr8jjpv_79k95xpsj8
KS
2008/10/3 Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]>
> K, I don't know where the edit is---or is it still being done?
> J
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> 2008/10/3 kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
>
> > there's an edit, I think the is's & are's might still be in transit but
> the
> > rest is better I think.
> >
> > KS
> >
> > 2008/10/1 kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
> >
> > > thanks Doug & Judy for the great advice. verbs are little ruffians that
> > > sometimes need extracating. underway!
> > >
> > > KS
> > >
> > > 2008/10/1 Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> > >
> > > Kasper
> > >>
> > >> I somewhat second Judy, but also wonder if you can rid the piece of
> the
> > >> 'is's & 'are's, get those lines out of the somewhat passive sense.
> > >>
> > >> the colours shine...
> > >>
> > >> Doug
> > >>
> > >> On 30-Sep-08, at 4:49 AM, kasper salonen wrote:
> > >>
> > >> disregard that earlier version, it's got more of a form now. here:
> > >>> http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfr8jjpv_79k95xpsj8
> > >>>
> > >>> KS
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >> Douglas Barbour
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> > >>
> > >> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/<http://www.ualberta.ca/%7Edbarbour/><
> http://www.ualberta.ca/%7Edbarbour/>
> > >>
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> >
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