K, I don't know where the edit is---or is it still being done?
J
2008/10/3 kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
> there's an edit, I think the is's & are's might still be in transit but the
> rest is better I think.
>
> KS
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> 2008/10/1 kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
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> > thanks Doug & Judy for the great advice. verbs are little ruffians that
> > sometimes need extracating. underway!
> >
> > KS
> >
> > 2008/10/1 Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> >
> > Kasper
> >>
> >> I somewhat second Judy, but also wonder if you can rid the piece of the
> >> 'is's & 'are's, get those lines out of the somewhat passive sense.
> >>
> >> the colours shine...
> >>
> >> Doug
> >>
> >> On 30-Sep-08, at 4:49 AM, kasper salonen wrote:
> >>
> >> disregard that earlier version, it's got more of a form now. here:
> >>> http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfr8jjpv_79k95xpsj8
> >>>
> >>> KS
> >>>
> >>>
> >> Douglas Barbour
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> >> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ <http://www.ualberta.ca/%7Edbarbour/>
> >>
> >> Latest books:
> >> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> >> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
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> >>
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
> >>
> >> bleary with hashish at a ghazal dud show
> >> in Kurdistan, soaring Muslim melodies
> >> over a smoked-out Jamaican one drop
> >>
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