superb visually, rhythmically ,etc.
should be turned into a sumptuous picture book, ie one to engage young readers.
From it they should emerge attuned to the visual, the rhythmical, and the etc.
Max
Quoting Jon Corelis <[log in to unmask]>:
> I've written a short prose piece which is a little too long to be put
> in an email, but I'd welcome any comments on it. It's on my literary
> web site at:
>
> http://jcorelis.googlepages.com/astoryfromherodotus
>
> Please let me know backchannel if there's anything wrong with the page.
> Thanks.
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