This seems better???? visions and revisions snap!!
NAGGING
when he
accused her
of nagging
she whinnied
stamped her hooves
and flicked her tail
provocatively
pmcmanus
q341
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Sent: 28 October 2008 20:29
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Subject: Pat Snap earlyish :~:#:~:Wodensday 29th October
NAGGING
when he
accused her
of nagging
she whinnied
stamped her hooves
and flicked her tail
at him provocatively
pmcmanus
q341
early -off to see grandorts in the morning
have got old computer going again -new one downloaded nearly 6000 emails
then died - didn't have this problems in caves Mammoth clubs you could rely
on and a good old flint slashers did wonders -but those cavewomen chasing
one with heavy clubs were a bit much
P shattered
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