I like what you're about here, Christopher.
Being me, have one query, do you want that line ('around is
constructed a butcher's shop') to register passivity, as the passive
voice does?
Doug
On 4-Sep-08, at 8:48 PM, Christopher C Jones wrote:
> Bar-B-Q part two:
Douglas Barbour
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