Thanks, Kasper, for your response to this piece! I appreciate your read on
it! Sheila
On Thu, Sep 11, 2008 at 5:28 AM, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> very interesting indeed, juxtaposition taken to great heights!
> these lines were most reminiscent of Cummings to me:
>
> rain (dark) gray (late)
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> stern (steep) round (heap)
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> KS
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> 2008/9/11 Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
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> > lob (puck) club (luck)
> > cell (shade) gray (raid)
> > due (north) rue (day)
> > light (rum) pared (some)
> >
> > stippled (blade) remanded (lave)
> > radicchio (sate) commingled (fate)
> > rain (dark) gray (late)
> > peace (fall) raw (leaves)
> >
> > border (sieve) crops (live)
> > torn (each) note (bleach)
> > stern (steep) round (heap)
> > singing (out) sand (lout)
> >
> > time (wine) lark (full)
> > worn (play) out (tray)
> > sore (gem) long (hem)
> > stray (log) white (grog)
> >
> >
> > sheila e. murphy
> >
>
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