This holds together nicely, sharply observed...
(do you need the 'we', ie, the 'we were'?)
Doug
On 22-Jun-08, at 8:18 AM, Nathan Hondros wrote:
> *Driving North*
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> we were carried away, a north line,
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> over the bitumen core and red margins,
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> furrowed states of brow, of wind shear;
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> of iron ore dust.
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> the road corrects two points of absence
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> and is the only way of leaving —
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> once there were fully scaped trees,
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> now just a car every mile or so
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> and too much sun.
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> --
> http://nathanhondros.blogspot.com
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