As I read, Janet, it seemed more & more a performance piece, so, as
such, it worked (if it werent I might want to cut a lot of 'the's & an
'and' or two, & maybe let the 'I' be more implied, but for the stage
all that works just fine...
Doug
On 3-May-08, at 9:22 PM, Janet Jackson wrote:
> *maintenance*
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