Yes, cryptic, wasn't it? What I thought I'd sent was an comment of
appreciation, about how much I liked this poem and the ending in particular!
On Thu, Apr 3, 2008 at 2:49 PM, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Interesting comment, Nathan
>
> On 02/04/2008, Nathan Hondros <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > On Wed, Apr 2, 2008 at 9:29 PM, David Bircumshaw <
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> > wrote:
> >
> >
> > > The rain gone, the snow.
> > > But not the hooded boy slapping
> > > an empty warehouse wall
> > > nor the two secretaries dragging
> > > quick fags on their breaks
> > >
> > > looking down the long lens
> > > at an arm's length day.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > Welford Rd, Leicester, about noon.
> > >
> > > --
> > > David Bircumshaw
> > > Website and A Chide's Alphabet
> > > http://homepage.ntlworld.com/david.bircumshaw/
> > > The Animal Subsides http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
> > > Leicester Poetry Society: http://www.poetryleicester.co.uk
> > >
> >
>
>
> --
> David Bircumshaw
> Website and A Chide's Alphabet
> http://homepage.ntlworld.com/david.bircumshaw/
> The Animal Subsides http://www.arrowheadpress.co.uk/books/animal.html
> Leicester Poetry Society: http://www.poetryleicester.co.uk
>
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