Far too many, or none at all, nathan.
I'd say that yours works quite well....
Maybe that failed line break only happened in my e-mail, I dont know....
Doug
On 15-Apr-08, at 9:13 AM, Nathan Hondros wrote:
> Is there a suitable definition of a snap floating around? Am I right
> in that
> it is a brief impromtu poem used for keeping the eye in?
Douglas Barbour
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