I liked the last stanza Janet, but wasnt sure if every word of the
first 2 was necessary (tho also not sure which ones to cut).
Doug
On 25-Mar-08, at 8:55 PM, Janet Jackson wrote:
> This wasn't meant to be so... ewww... but it took on a life of its
> own.
> Don't take it too literally, ok!
Douglas Barbour
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to rid me of
the ugh in
thought
i spell anew
weave the world
out of the or
binary
bpNichol
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