Thanks Dave but so sad
Patrick in his shell
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
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Sent: 26 March 2008 09:19
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Subject: Re: pat snap *_*_* Wednesday, 26 March 2008
that made me smile, Patrick. Here's a wee haiku I've just made up, with
apologies to Basho's pond and frog, just for you:
Orion and the moon
porchlight a winter sky. Oops ~
snail shell crunching sound.
On 26/03/2008, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> BY CHANCE
>
>
>
> He
>
> by chance
>
> in the middle
>
> of the night
>
> peered out
>
> through his lacy
>
> curtained windows
>
> and saw
>
> under the full moon
>
> of the clear sky
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> on his fine
>
> ghostly lawn
>
> surrounded by it's
>
> herbaceous borders
>
> topiaried hedges
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> the Worms so
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> elegantly dancing
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> a pavane or galliard
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> swaying so gently
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> perhaps he could hear
>
> faintest of courtly
>
> strummed music
>
>
>
> He
>
> decided not
>
> to tell Her
>
> about it in
>
> the morning
>
> but
>
> fondly regarded
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> the casts
>
> left behind
>
> little ringed
>
> reminders
>
>
>
>
>
> pmcmanus
>
> q227
>
> raynes park London uk
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> 08:49
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>
>
>
>
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David Bircumshaw
Website and A Chide's Alphabet
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Leicester Poetry Society: http://www.poetryleicester.co.uk
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