your poetry is taking impressive twists & turns Patrick, growing all
the time, surprising while working excellently within the expectations
of your style.
KS
On 19/03/2008, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> POETRYETC SNAP
>
> it was not
> yet a snap
> and so far
> it had only
> got to a 'sna'
> it could go
> either way
> into say
> a 'snag'
> or worse
> poetryetc's gang
> would find him
> wanting
> so desperately
> he tried
> willing for a
> good 'ol letter 'p'
> but although budding
> it was still sadly
> too early to say
>
> whilst others out there
> effortlessly brilliantly
> were snapping freely
> caught in the magic
> of their full rewarding
> and exciting worlds
>
> perhaps he could
> encourage it
> with warmth
> watering or singing
> lullabies little ditties?
> but at all costs
> not push too hard
> it could suddenly
> turn into a
> nasty 'snapdragon'
> 'snaggletooth'
> or even worse
> an exploding
> 'snaphaunce'
>
> best to
> try to relax
> let it come
> in it's own time
> but it's wednesday
> and poetryetc
> is greedily waiting
> pressure is on burning
> perhaps a small glass
> of something
> would help?
>
> he patted
> for comfort
> VB's head
> and got bitten
> but not too badly
>
>
>
>
>
> pmcmanus
> q226
> 'VB' is Vile Boris a cat of mean disposition
> Supposed to be a pet
>
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