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From: "Douglas Barbour" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, February 14, 2008 11:40 AM
Subject: Re: snap: Wednesday lines
solid visuals, Andrew, & sharply etched; but I'm not sure what 'twenty-
eights to crows -' is...? unless we're just to see 28 crows?
Doug
I second Doug on this, Andrew. Very precise - invites the reader's eye to
soar -- but "twenty-eights"? - Fred
On 13-Feb-08, at 4:12 PM, andrew burke wrote:
> Every Wednesday
> they string-up
> lines
>
> all across
> suburban skies
> four black lines
>
> before the blue
> of a startling
> clear sky
>
> then birds come -
> twenty-eights to crows -
> to perch and
>
> meditate
>
> --
> Andrew
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>
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