echoing others, bravo.
& the structure is brilliant, don't see lots of stanzas from you normally
KS
On 27/02/2008, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> YEARS
>
>
> She
> She had
> over the years
> delightfully
> mellowed
>
> &
>
> He
> He had
> over the years
> deplorably
> mildewed
>
>
> pmcmanus
> q208
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