I tend to resist one word line poems, unless they work, of course,
which I feel these do, as a set, that final one collecting the
implications of the others....
Doug
On 16-Feb-08, at 4:41 AM, Patrick McManus wrote:
> Hi Tina enjoyed these -so deliciously sharp(is succinct the word?)
> very
> brave thought 1&3 strongest could see them as a series any nuff said
> Neighbours should be coming back from Ozzland today -escaped !!
> Cheers P old duffer P
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> Subject: three pictures
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> HE
>
> chin
> unyielding
> voice
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> SHE
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> leg
> coiling
> arms
>
> CHILD
>
> eyes
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> recording
>
> fixing
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