Didn't mean to actually send that last.
Sorry.
Hal
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> From: Halvard Johnson <[log in to unmask]>
> Date: January 24, 2008 10:13:06 PM GMT-06:00
> To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]>
> Subject: Re: Gambit
>
> Okay. Confusion bad?
>
> Hal
>
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> On Jan 24, 2008, at 5:18 PM, andrew burke wrote:
>
>> Good one, Hal.
>>
>> When you speak of 'the children in hospital'. they become the
>> subject of
>> that sentence. The next sentence refers to 'them', and says there's
>> 'no good
>> reason' for them, which to my mind refers back to the children. I
>> found this
>> confusing.
>>
>> Andrew
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On 25/01/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
>>> Whew. Sharper than...
>>>
>>> Great stuff, Hal.
>>>
>>> Doug
>>> On 24-Jan-08, at 7:26 AM, Halvard Johnson wrote:
>>>
>>>> Gambit
>>>
>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>> Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
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>>>
>>> Nothing I'd read
>>> prepared me for a body this unfair.
>>>
>>> John Newlove
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Andrew
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