Hello again, Doug
I don't know why some of my emails are displaying to me without any of the formatting. It's very strange. Thanks for letting me know that it's alright at your end.
And thanks very much for the comments. I struggled to get this one into any kind of shape and wasn't sure how anyone else would read it.
Tina
[log in to unmask]http://www.fatmandancing.co.ukhttp://www.myspace.com/fat_man_dancing> Date: Wed, 2 Jan 2008 08:46:18 -0700> From: [log in to unmask]> Subject: Re: I'll try again!> To: [log in to unmask]> > It was pretty much that way in the first post I got, Tina. I like the > attempt at a kind of chorus to the right, & what those phrases point > toward.> > As for the way the memories come & jostle, that works too....> > Doug> On 31-Dec-07, at 4:48 PM, Tina Bass wrote:> > > If you want to see this poem in the format that I intended then follow > > this link:> >> > http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm? > > fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=91532408&blogID=343048452> >> > Time for sleep I think.> >> > Tina> Douglas Barbour> 11655 - 72 Avenue NW> Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9> (780) 436 3320> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/> > Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664> > Oh, goddamnit, we forgot the silent prayer.> > Dwight D, Eisenhower> [at a cabinet meeting]
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