Good one, Hal.
When you speak of 'the children in hospital'. they become the subject of
that sentence. The next sentence refers to 'them', and says there's 'no good
reason' for them, which to my mind refers back to the children. I found this
confusing.
Andrew
On 25/01/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Whew. Sharper than...
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> Great stuff, Hal.
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> Doug
> On 24-Jan-08, at 7:26 AM, Halvard Johnson wrote:
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> > Gambit
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> Douglas Barbour
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> Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
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> Nothing I'd read
> prepared me for a body this unfair.
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