"Skill of the phrasing", that's perfect Stephen. I have been trying to
understand why I love Sheila's work so much. Phrasing, the turn of a phrase.
Also, such - exquisite unexpectedness!
- Peter Ciccariello
On Nov 28, 2007 8:22 PM, Stephen Vincent <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I love shear skill of the phrasing here, Shelia, but the poem remains
> oblique for me - it seems to suggest a larger landscape in which much more
> is unfolding. I want the poem to open up more on that landscape.
>
> But maybe I am shortsighted!
>
> Stephen V
> http://stephenvincent.net/blog/
>
> Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote: Larissa, Doug, and Anny, I
> appreciate your kind comments. Thank you very
> much. Sheila
>
> On Nov 28, 2007 8:50 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>
> > & I'm amazed by reading here; lovely, Sheila.
> >
> > Doug
> > On 27-Nov-07, at 7:21 PM, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> >
> > > too treble a cost they felt lost
> > > to what world they had made
> > >
> > > it was a sacrifice to watch to wait
> > > she breathed awake
> > >
> > > her aware eyes shimmered strong
> > > and they in turn were children
> > >
> > > to her tiny size for she
> > > amazed by being there
> > >
> > >
> > > sheila e. murphy
> > >
> > >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > 11655 - 72 Avenue NW
> > Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9
> > (780) 436 3320
> > http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ <http://www.ualberta.ca/%7Edbarbour/>
> >
> > Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> > http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
> >
> > As one beauty
> > cancels another, remembrance
> > is a foolish act, a double-heded snake
> > striking in both directions
> >
> > John Newlove
> >
>
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