This is marvelous, Sheila! I love the way it dances in
and out of rhyme on the same "-or" sound. And the
narrative is gripping, too. Your "Lorraine" reminds me
of Neko Case's "Pauline, the girl with the parking-lot
eyes."
Candice
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